I know all of my many devoted readers, ha ha, were waiting on pins and needles for the results of the FSOT. Well, I passed. This time around the test scores were included in the results letter which is a nice change.
Job Knowledge 64.56
Biographic Information 61.91
English Expression 50.53
That is 177.00 which was about a 12 point improvement and I improved in each section.
So I guess I am not the greatest editor of awkwardly written passages, but can write OK myself. They must have graded my second essay or felt very sorry for me.